Query

A cry sounds out

spills through the trees

like fog spreading outward

holding all still

the cry circles back

like a boomerang in flight

asking who loves you

 

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

I like pondering on things and this one give you that effect...Bravo

[MCS]

Thank you dear poet...silence and stillness are hard to endure; yet needed

[Pryde Foltz]

This quite the amazing piece. The imager was so strong I could sense the vibrant stillness of the forest.