Irrational

Irrational

A Poem by MCS


In crowds

my first reaction is

I look for you

 

Reality comes

rushing in

causing a misstep

 

You’re gone

the burn

of unshed tears

 

Always the

same question

do the leftover people

 

Do as I do

look and listen

for those they’ve lost


© 2013 MCS


Author's Note

MCS
~ acrylic on canvas M.C.S.

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'Irrational'
MCS,
Can we categorize the loss when it comes. Loss is it's own entity. Living surrounded by others and it seems that they are living, and functioning and enjoying life. It is hard to move to a new reality where one is living solo. But evhen even surrounded by friends we still are separate individuals. I feel for you and anyone who has and still remembers the past and it's special person now gone.
Blessings,
Kathy




Posted 5 Years Ago


beautiful painting and words. I have these same reactions in crowds, I find it kind of funny, how the mind lingers and holds onto things.

Posted 11 Years Ago


MCS

11 Years Ago

Aaron thank you for reading and commenting
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Added on November 3, 2013
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MCS
MCS

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