Yeah. Writing my thoughts out.

A Poem by canihasmochi

I don't have many friends, but those I do have I cherish dearly. My relationship with each of them varies, but these feelings I have holds constant for all of them.

Yeah. Writing out my thoughts.

The unbearable pain, where did it go?
             Gone.
And what of sorrow, worry, anger, bitterness, loneliness?
                     Gone as well.

Darkness cannot exist in the same space as light.

Whenever you are around, all of my troubles disappear.

Of all things good and are of light, you shine the brightest.

You are my star.

I look up to you with such amazement and admiration.

I look at you and I am in awe.
I look at you and I am in love.
Within you is my love.
By you I am loved.
With you, we love.

But we will not budge. We will not be moved.

You are strong, as am I. We’ve made choices that led us here today. To each other.

Together, we are unstoppable.

Until the end of time, you and I will go..and beyond.

I love you.

05.16.11

© 2011 canihasmochi

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Love so powerful, not even death could stop us.
Love so innocent, there’s no room for doubts.
Love so wonderful, all will see it for what it is; simply amazing.
Love so strong, people will want to try and break us.

I so loved this part, this is quite the amazing write.
I enjoyed this. Very nicely written & expressed.

Posted 13 Years Ago

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Dark Cloud

Whenever you are around, all of my troubles disappear.

Of all things good and are of light, you shine the brightest.

You are my star.

I look up to you with such amazement and admiration.

I look at you and I am in awe.
I look at you and I am in love.
Within you is my love.
By you I am loved.
With you, we love.

This part here is my favorite. Though I enjoyed the entire write. You can feel the emotion that you put into this it's truely heart felt.