Self Destructive

she wonders; she forgets.

She wonders why her life’s a mess.

 

She wonders why no nice guys like her.

 

She wonders why she’s failing school.

 

She wonders why her parents gave up on her.

 

She wonders why her friends stab her in the back.

 

She wonders why she has a reputation.

 

She wonders why she’s so popular, but so alone.

 

She wonders why her life’s such a mess.

 

 

She forgets that she created this mess.

 

She forgets that she only goes for jerks.

 

She forgets that she never tries in class.

 

She forgets that she pushed them both away.

 

She forgets that she stabbed them first.

 

She forgets that she’s had sex with five guys.

 

She forgets that popularity isn’t friendship.

 

She forgets that she created this mess.

 

 

She’s self-destructive,

And she doesn’t even realize. 

Author's Note

just something that popped to mind. tell me what you think.

Reviews

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

Honestly not sure how I feel about this, wasnt feeling the repetiveness of this piece. But it was a good read. Keep writing! Nicely done.

[tk]

this is something to ponder about.
i liked the way she wondered. and also the way she forgot.
this piece reflected the society's mind.
indeed, a brilliant piece.. :)

[luna11]

Wow this is a great poem.
Well done
xx

[SuicidePact.]

this was epic!

i really really liked it!!

[13ReasonsWhy]

OH ME LIKEY. :D

[faint smile]

I love this...Its so deep...awsome write :)

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

I love this :D