You'll Never Know

i notice the small things . . . i wonder if you do, too.

The smallest of things,

mean the world to me, 

but that's something you'll never know.

The brush of our fingers,

a small smile, 

makes my happiness overflow.

I can imagine myself holding that hand, 

I can see myself kissing that smile,

and it feels like I should've long ago.

You've got a choice,

is it her or me?

oh, please, don't go. 

Your gaze connects with mine,

your lips say my name,

and i feel happier than i'll ever show.

You confuse me,

you make me nervous,

but when I'm with you, i can feel my heart grow.

The smallest of things,

mean the world to me,

but that's something you'll never know.

Author's Note

how mushy. but i thought it displayed well what i was feeling, so whatever. for a person who'll never know how much he means to me. (see what i did there? i used the title in a sentence!) anyways, review truthfully, and enjoy:)!

Reviews

[Nath]

My first thought when I read this was "Awww, how cute^^"
It is indeed true that we notice and cherish the small things that are a part of a bigger something, or rather someONE, because they are a part of that siginificant somebody.
Overall very nicely written! :-)

[~Dragon X]

Very sweet and sad and all that stuff. XD I can feel a whole array of emotions coming from this short poem--great job! :D

[Maddie:]]

beautiful and cute:] well-written!

[Unknown]

B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L...just like cheese!

[Revolutionary]

I felt the need to read something by you.This was impressive.I plan to read more of your writing.I will friend you.By the way thank you again.I am sure this guy in the poem made the wrong choice.

[BloodyMary]

Very beautifully worded.
Nice job Emma!

[Sarah]

very true but very nice. nice work.
XD

[Ness of Love]

Very true and very good!

[grace]

loved it! it is really true! totally agreed with 13ReasonsWhy! loved it, really good write:)

[BrokenDreamer]

This is amazing