You'll Never Know

i notice the small things . . . i wonder if you do, too.

The smallest of things,

mean the world to me, 

but that's something you'll never know.

The brush of our fingers,

a small smile, 

makes my happiness overflow.

I can imagine myself holding that hand, 

I can see myself kissing that smile,

and it feels like I should've long ago.

You've got a choice,

is it her or me?

oh, please, don't go. 

Your gaze connects with mine,

your lips say my name,

and i feel happier than i'll ever show.

You confuse me,

you make me nervous,

but when I'm with you, i can feel my heart grow.

The smallest of things,

mean the world to me,

but that's something you'll never know.

Author's Note

how mushy. but i thought it displayed well what i was feeling, so whatever. for a person who'll never know how much he means to me. (see what i did there? i used the title in a sentence!) anyways, review truthfully, and enjoy:)!

Reviews

[Saddam]

A splendid writing dear....and when she say to him.... that part touch most..
The smallest of things,
mean the world to me,

but that's something you'll never know.

[Sami Khalil]

A splendid mushy poem as you say. Thank you for sharing...:)...........

[Baban.A.A]

well.....to be honest it was very truthful. I say human without respecting small things, will lose and miss chances that are for once a life. this common between lovers, one is always running to accost, and one never stops to know what the other wants to say, and they flow arounf this circle till one of them break the circle and go out. I do like it very much, but if you could write it in rhyme not free verse might have turned out better. thank you and best luck.

[Night]

It is true indeed that we often overlook the small things in life, but if we slow down and observe, we will realize that they can be just as important as the large things. Your poem is sweet and beautiful!

Great Work!

[Miss Marie Riorden.]

This is adorable. Going for the small things instead of the big things. That's how life should be, shouldn't it? (:

I actually needed something cute to read and this was just the thing. Thanks!

-Marie Riorden-

[The Batman]

Great poem filled with emotions. It may be mushy, but what love poems aren't? Love is mushy haha. This poem IS very good and well-crafted, and I did deeply enjoy it. So, once again, keep up the great work and good job!

[JRB]

very mushy, yet thoughtfully put keep up the writes

[A. L. Allen]

This is so sweet! I wish that we all had the courage to say how we really feel to those we love. Unfortunately, we don't, and that's often what leads to so much heart break.
Awesome job!

[Afily]

I find this wonderful, and it made my day (:

[Lilly]

A very sweet poem. Something that I'm sure many can relate to. I like what you've said in the beginning:
"The smallest of things,
mean the world to me," --- I agree with this.

Nice write.