how mushy. but i thought it displayed well what i was feeling, so whatever. for a person who'll never know how much he means to me. (see what i did there? i used the title in a sentence!) anyways, review truthfully, and enjoy:)!
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well.....to be honest it was very truthful. I say human without respecting small things, will lose and miss chances that are for once a life. this common between lovers, one is always running to accost, and one never stops to know what the other wants to say, and they flow arounf this circle till one of them break the circle and go out. I do like it very much, but if you could write it in rhyme not free verse might have turned out better. thank you and best luck.
It is true indeed that we often overlook the small things in life, but if we slow down and observe, we will realize that they can be just as important as the large things. Your poem is sweet and beautiful!
Great poem filled with emotions. It may be mushy, but what love poems aren't? Love is mushy haha. This poem IS very good and well-crafted, and I did deeply enjoy it. So, once again, keep up the great work and good job!
This is so sweet! I wish that we all had the courage to say how we really feel to those we love. Unfortunately, we don't, and that's often what leads to so much heart break.
Awesome job!
A very sweet poem. Something that I'm sure many can relate to. I like what you've said in the beginning:
"The smallest of things,
mean the world to me," --- I agree with this.
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