I'm Just a Girl

I’m no beauty queen, I’m no model.

I’m no princess, I’m no star.

I’m not famous, I’m not known.

I’m not perfect, I’m not flawless.

 

I’m just a girl.

 

I want to be kissed, I want to be loved.

I want to be cherished, I want to be held.

I want to hold someone’s hand,

And I want someone who wants to hold mine.

 

I have dreams, I have ambitions.

I have a smile, I have a laugh. 

I have a heart, and it has stitches. 

I have friends, I have crushes.

I have school, I have pressure.

I have things to strive for

And I have people to impress.

 

I know I’m not too special,

I know I’m not the greatest catch.

I know all that.

I really know it all.

 

But I want to be perfect and flawless,

I want to be really special.

I want to be loved and never broken,

And I want all my dreams to come true.

 

But I’m just a girl.             

Author's Note

i was in a very, shall we say, unhappy mood. wrote this in the middle of it. i think the flow is a bit awkward, so any suggestions to make it better is appreciated. i kinda just wrote and didn't think.

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Reviews

[Farah]

really nice! write on girl! =D

[Maddie:]]

lovely!:] expressed how many girls feel out there beautifully! ending was definitely impacting as well. great write!

[Sarah]

It captured great emotion, I think we all feel like this at some point. I loved it.
XD

[grace]

woah.. i loved it! it captured all the feelings i feel, and I'm sure many other girls feel too! love love it!:)

[TWISTED NIGHTMARE]

this was a wonderful poem that doesn't need to change but is all up to you for it is your poem and how you feel... you expressed your feelings beautifully and i'm sure every girl could relate cuz we all have our problems but also have hearts that want to feel loved and love someone...i have noticed when in an unhappy mood i write and count a lot on my friends but i hope you feel better... we are all beautiful in our own way and we all will find love

[paradise]

Im sorry yourin a unhappy mood I also am in a unhappy mood. Sometiems writing a poem to express this or what i do is cry my eyes out while talking to friends I hope you start feeling better and are happy because you did a great job at capturing how you felt and why. I think its perfectly fine. It has good flow andthe ending was great No need to change it but its all up tp you

[Kim]

I really liked and enjoyed this piece so much.

[KT]

Very cool poem! I really liked the wording and the message that comes from it. Great job! :)

[Sarah E. Pearson]

amazing amazing amazing. the entire time i was erading it in my head like it was a song. still amazing. Great Write. :)

[13ReasonsWhy]

amazing... i am just a girl. its good you didnt think while writing this... sometimes its important not to think. just let go and everything will be okay. amazing write! job well done, as usual....