Can i just say my eyes bulged when i read that this is shelved in TWENTY THREE LIBRARIES!? TWENTY-FREAKING-THREE! ! ITS A MIRACLE!
**awarded A-M-A-Z-I-N-G in the The Book Contest contest**
Book Excerpt -----> **The frigid October air circulated around me and chills slithered up my spine. I heard his footsteps and waited for the warmth of another body next to mine. Except when his hand touched the back of my neck, there was no warmth. Only icy fingers.
Before I had a chance to flinch, he grabbed my shoulders and thrust himself into me. His lips landed directly on my racing pulse and he bit in. Pain enveloped me and I started seeing black spots. I let out an ear-splitting scream as he gulped in a huge swallow of my blood.
“Stop!” I cried. “Stop drinking! You could kill me!”
A sadistic smile crept onto his lips. “Would that be such a tragedy?”**
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i found myself staying up late last night reading every chapter! you definitely had me captivated with your stunning imagery and vivid descriptions! well written, and i especially enjoyed the humor you applied to the main character:] nice job, this was a very well crafted story! ill be waiting for the next chapter!
I absolutely loved your story!!! Even if I say it is awesome, gripping, mesmerising, mind blowing, excellent, brilliant...it would still not do justice to your story. Please continue writing it for I'm desperately waiting for the next chapter!
I've been away for awhile, busy with school and stuff, and haven't been able to read too many writings on here. I tried sticking to reviewing poems and such since they were quick to read. However, this books sounds VERY interesting and I do believe I'll have to make an exception with it haha. I'll try to review a few chapters tonight, even.
i found myself staying up late last night reading every chapter! you definitely had me captivated with your stunning imagery and vivid descriptions! well written, and i especially enjoyed the humor you applied to the main character:] nice job, this was a very well crafted story! ill be waiting for the next chapter!
Okay, I will read it, but only if you promise not to delete it, and give me some time, there is a lot here. I don't usually read books on here, but I like your work, and I like you, so I will.
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