off to wonderland

prompted by a drawing i did

butterflies with window panes,
hidden in their wings.
colours as vibrant,
as the dusk bird sings.
if eyes are windows
to see into the soul,
then butterflies are portals
no need for a rabbit hole.
now off to wonderland
oh here we go,
to a land holding wonders
we have yet to know.

Reviews

[B]

I love butterflies
Very well done

Sweet and light
Has a flying feel to it

[CD Campbell]

Nice. Reminds me of something that I might have wrote during my psychedelic years. Well written. CD

[JayceeC]

Loved the wonderland feel of butterflies with bright transparent style wings flitting and floating. You have one sentence that needs to be fixed. You can probably pick it out for your self but "if it is said that eyes are windows" just cut this to "If eyes are windows" it will flow smoother and the other words are not needed for understanding of a common saying.
I would really love to jump into your wonderland of souls...It seems like a marvelous place to be!