My dad

He is the best person to have around.. he is not perfect-his anger bursts are volcanoes and he has got a dark complexion, but he has a way of always lifting up my mood. LOVE YOU DAD!!!

I can picture my first day on earth,

with you holding me in your hands,

You tell me how you felt,

and thats the best feeling ever..

You understand me best,

and change my tears into a smile,

i dont know how you do it ,

but i love such times..

people keep saying that girls are always papa's girl

and thats truly true...

i am sure ,none can ever deny.

 

Your greatest wish is to see me happy

and mine is the same reversed :)

so dad my..first poem

 is for you composed.

I know it isn't perfect,

It would take time to be

but it is all from deep within,

and thats all that really matters.

Author's Note

i hope you guys like it.

Reviews

[tuvi]

Hi Rockyoung ,

I'm sure your dad would love it ...
he doesn't need it to be perfect , in fact he doesn't want it to be even expressed in words .... true respect and love shows in actions louder than words ....
so love and respect them ..no matter how odd the situation ever gets

Regards,
Tuvi

[simplyme]

thanks a lot...i know he will be proud and love it..
n yes, you are right actions speak louder than words!!! :)

[complicated 20]

This poem show that's you truly love your dad. I'am sure he will be proud of you ..:)

[simplyme]

yah ! thanksz n yes i do love him the most :)