Forgiveness

Lay open your propitious soul..

bare witness to grief's penitence

bring forth the suckle of forgiveness

that hope may flourish in the morrow.

Reviews

[joshua deathdealer]

I like the way this was constructed. Well done.

[Michael X]

wow, you really bring the environment to life!
"bring forth the suckle of forgiveness" this is classic thought!

[Ed Hart]

people think that forgiveness is incident specific...the real stuff is pervasive, and goes before you

[KAREN]

Forgivenes does bring hope of better days. Your poem fills the reader with that hope.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Inkslinger, what a come back you've made! This is wonderful, the words bring about such a potent meaning for us all!

[Fabian G. Franklin]

I would sow seeds of patience and joy to see hope blossom...perhaps it might produce the fruit of faith. A farmer knows that growing things is always a labor of love...that was the reason Adam was given a garden to tend. I enjoyed reading this. Oh...slight typo in "flourish"...high marks regardless.