Yes

Yes

A Poem by Brenda Caballero
"

When someone changes your mind with their actions!

"
It took a while,
but I finally got around to saying
"Yes"

Now 
each time I see you 
walking
 toward me,
I wonder
 why
"No"
was even an option.

© 2013 Brenda Caballero


Author's Note

Brenda Caballero
This is a personal poem

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B...good poem. Not sure the bolding is needed at all...bobc

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brenda Caballero

11 Years Ago

Thanks for reading! I've made revisions, I thought you were right about not needing the bold :)

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Added on September 3, 2013
Last Updated on September 5, 2013
Tags: relationships, people, poem, poetry, feelings, happiness, boyfriend, girlfriend, life, risk, prose, freewrite

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Brenda Caballero
Brenda Caballero

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Mainly a reader, and no writer. I just like to put my ideas down on paper so that one day I can look back and relate to myself. It's important to see how I've grown and where I am in the grand scheme .. more..

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