La Sombra Sobre El Valle (The Shade Over The Valley)

This is a poem I wrote in Spanish then translated into English.

Seguirame a un mundo oscuro

Dó nde el sol no es visible

Las fantasmas está n volando aleredador ustedes

Estaban buscando por alguien a ayudarlos

Pero nadie era alli

Hasta ahora

Necesitan nos a guardarlos para el mal que vivir aqui

Muerstenlos a un lugar dó nde ellos pueden vivir en paz

Construa una pared que no es destrucitivo

Por ellos será n salvo para todo mal por siempre

 

 

The Shade Over the Valley

Follow me to a dark world

Where the sun cannot be seen

Ghosts are flying around you

They’ve been looking for someone to help them

But no one was there

Until now

They need us to save them from the evil that resides here

Show them to a place where they can live in peace

Build a wall that cannot be destroyed

So they will be safe from all evil forever

 

La Sombra Sobre el Valle

Author's Note

if you know Spanish and you see errors, tell me.

Reviews

[MagiCrystal]

Muy cierto.. los fantasmas no viven.. y solo sufren.. ellos no ven luz ni humanos
solo siguen en el pantano del infierno.. donde la eternidad les consume.
Te felicito.. tienes bastante talento

a few mistakes in these words..(( Seguirame.)). Seguirme

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Awesomeness. It was beautiful in both Spanish and English. Why not try writing a few more poems like this, or maybe one in German???