We as people

 The loss of life

brings tears to the ducts

of weakened men

  physical sturdiness has little

to do with the dejection of the modern

human

 We as people have no control over the

strong sentiment we hold over

things with such irrelevance

 We hold things close

cradle them with much adoration

some unneeded,

most unneeded

 Not one has celebrated the loss

of life for one they shelter

I am weak,

You are weak,

we are weak

 We as people are a weak race,

fragile race,

fearful race

 We cry, "Let us be weak in peace!"

we fear that our weak will peak from

the flesh we forget to shield

 Kill the kin

kill the soul

 We as people are all the same

a synonym of each other

you and I are one,

we are one

 

 

 

Reviews

[Rachelle]

So much truth in your words! A read to provoke thoughts and some introspection….

[Pól]

very profound message delivered with eloquence. Well done

[Pax]

you spoke of what's reality now a days... facts and truth about how we human becomes more materialistic and needy... very impressive work!

[Shaquana Adams]

This poem speaks the truth. If we could only remember these facts everyday, we'd be better off for it. Brava! :)

[Deuces]

There is much truth and eternal maturity in this piece. I tend to agree with all of the beliefs in this poem. As strong as we portray, humans are a fragile species. Truest line: "most unneeded." We unnecessarily create and then crumble over burdens we place on ourselves.

Definitely adding to favorites and looking forward to more. Thanks.

[Writer]

Thank you.