Intrepidity

When fear dominates your world, be an intrepid mortal.

I n t r e p i d i t y

Time passed by and darkness began to rise

Then the world had created dark grey skies

When nothing else seems to have any sense

And all you do is cry in deep suspense

The notion of bliss in this world seems surreal

Yet nothing can stop the excessive zeal

When everyone else lost their inner faith

Be brave and start the fight; it is your fate

The world is not fair; it kills with its flare

It eliminates people in thin air

Yet when fear dominates your own portal

Stand up and be that intrepid mortal

Author's Note

I wrote this poem to mirror my current emotion and to lessen the feeling of excessive frustration.
I allow criticisms as long as it'll help with the development of my skills.
Thank you and happy reading! :)

Reviews

[wordman]

wonderful story,no criticisms

[Kate Visorro]

Thank you so much! :)

[wordman]

my pleasure

[yuhee]

A great poem to uplift spirit. Keep going. :)

[Kate Visorro]

Thank you so much! :)

[APOORVA]

super liked it :)
u have a potential. i literally read it twice

[Kate Visorro]

Thank you so much! :)