"Swallow This"

"Swallow This"

A Poem by stephen dillon
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weird and old as hell like circa 2007 when i did not even have a license

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"Mandolin roses planted into a sawdust mulch garden growing human jaws with retractable tounges inside of a daffodile jungle where the silence never lets the poetic mumble to the muses, Apolo are you there?, near the garden to lend your thoughts to my ear whilst i set the page aflame with socialiable syllables to start the socialogical consequenses to radioactivate a mental revolution found in a sulfate chemical solution, Now swallow this down into the throat you've always hated more than any throat you have ever hated before

© 2013 stephen dillon


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stephen dillon
help me get published dang it

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This reads so perfectly like 'I could describe this exactly as it should be, if only I could, but I can't so I will. I just did, now f*****g love it.'

And I do.

Posted 11 Years Ago


stephen dillon

9 Years Ago

thank you so much
i love this! the train of thought, the impulsive manner and the strange but somehow not strange imagery. my only critique would to be perhaps put it into stanzas so it is easier to read? i love poetry like this

Posted 11 Years Ago


All kinds of neat wordplay in this one...nicely done my friend.

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You know I love your abstract writes, usually takes me a few reads, always intriguing and food for thought. If you want to get published, you better clean up your typos. Other than that, quite enjoyed this one.

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Wait....we're not good enough for that?
stephen dillon

11 Years Ago

i'm just lazy
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Gawd, how hard is spell check? ;-P

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Added on April 7, 2013
Last Updated on May 3, 2013
Tags: swallow, rose, page, jaws, jungle, tounges
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stephen dillon
stephen dillon

savannah, GA



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