“Manic” (bi-polaroid android kodachrome catacombs) pt.2

part 2 of cinderblock its basicaily the opposite emotions

Reawakened by falling through dreams of renewable and endless knowledge brought me to a room where a strong   Smell of Sunday morning is slowly copulating with the salt entering the air like music, a sizzling orchestra crescendos with a drum roll of breaking skin signaling through the unknown to make believe in myself to be equally bronzed like the statue of male perfection bred to leave an exquisite corpse makes me one content hog

Author's Note

read cinderblock first please

Reviews

[Balkaran Sidhu]

nice flow man....good one

[stephen dillon]

thanx

[Annie Ale]

I imagined hearing it read at a poetry jam in my favorite cafe. It flows so well, and I can picture it in my mead as I read it. Wonderful!

[stephen dillon]

thanx thats what i wanted

[Holly Mason]

what a way to follow up on cinderblock
I did not expect it to end with those lines...truly crafty
sunday morning the smell of it great details
thank you for sharing

[stephen dillon]

thanx ppl were asking for verse 2 so i had to do it

[Eileenws]

I didn't expect the ending one content hog. You do a nice job on the images. Good job.