"Hung Up In Perdition"

it's about my love for asthetics i am not that deep

past the hanging moss frozen like bodies in the night and on into the light

where i'll be seen from traviling cars and excite the people of the city

who'll notice me for my letters and certain type of wordsmithing

fusing together a new point of view on life one in which you and i

are still amazed by who we are and the things we can do

we are born to create evolution

lifes not a tuxedo get it dirty 

wear all your fancy clothing until your sports coat has the mange

bring on the exotic the funky and the strange

because everyones permitted and no one is the same

eat it all fast for you have but 15mins of fame

to start what you ended and begin what you've finished

Author's Note

just kinda wrote it i was bored

Reviews

[kublakhan27]

Although this may be a piece borne of boredom, it strikes me as a very definitive statement on a writer in the process of formulating his own voice...a thoughtful and significant work in any event, and I hope I'm not totally off the mark in my interpretation haha

[stephen dillon]

just wait until i edit it i always write continuosly watch it grow then edit kinda like tending a garden "just pruning them ole' bushes"

[kublakhan27]

Right on, I'm a lazy editor haha