"no noose for a name"

this is very old but i like it still

Rebar face with no noose for a name

without a rafter forrest he has no place to hang

Iron jockstraps jiggle into a penny arcade

but sadly all his coins are jammend inside his brain

Sometimes he panics and turns on himself

yet, he calms knowing everybodies burned by some defect in health

Nows no time to change with the world looking so bleak

for every new thought he must sneak in to think

His cut-up nerves slide him on through

to flip the switch on the lines that connect him to you

Now you will know the struggle he feels wishing for sleep at night

both praying for death while realizing this is human life

Reviews

[C.M. Dakota]

This sounds like the lyrics to an epic rock song. I like it

[stephen dillon]

i had coheed and cambria in mind when i wrote this

[C.M. Dakota]

Cool I love music so it works

[stephen dillon]

anyhelp would be great