thin lips

i though i'd poke some fun at the writers who overload their work with images for the sake of sounding smart

“Thin Lips”

Fundamentally overdeveloped phonetics systematically scrohnized into blizzards of syntax, compiled into contrary concerto’s manifested through visions of symbiotic symbolism without concern for mangled legs of literary lions growling at pathetic paramours promoting the neglectful negation of nonsense nouns serving the singular purpose of flexing the musical muscle , expelling this English escape artist from his own crowded classroom, high below the afore mentioned  afterbirth apocalypse spilling out and up the spiral spine of regurgitating readers remaking and renaming but never renewing always hiccup and ha’chewing  snot nosed manifesto pre chewed gum post chewing.

Reviews

[bpark]

An impressive write to say the least, it flows without interruption through to the end and paints an intricate portrait. This is definitely my type of poetry, it takes talent to put something like this down and have it flow like you have. Digging it for real.

[stephen dillon]

thanx alot ,i read some of yore poems as well and in one word perfect

[icelandicblue]

Oh my god this is great. Your alliteration was fabulous and funny- seriously symbiotic symbolism- how fantastic is that. Yes, and those neglectful negation of nonsense nouns that overwhelm comprehension can be quite a tsunami or as my daughter is fond of saying- words vomited all over the page.

[Muse]

English translation:
Sometimes writer's try TOO HARD on the use of perfect rhyme..use of vocabs...syllable counts.....therefore; they lose their message...sadder yet, they lose creative heart.

[Naomi Bloom]

Say that 5 times fast.

Hilarious. This reminds me of V's speech in V for Vendetta.

I love the alliteration and how you switch it up every 2-3 words.

[stephen dillon]

thanx alot

[CharlyeMonroe]

Damn, that's an eye full of alliteration.

[stephen dillon]

it's kind of a spoof on the oppisite side of street poets and academic snobs