coffee pot thought

i don't even know if i like this but it sounds good when spoken aloud but lets rool wit it

Awake with eyes sewn shut from left over sleep, thunder raging like a doorbell from the heavens, I’m shivering to the bone as tears fall windswept across my skin. I sip the first cup of caffeinated joy coupled with lungful’s of cancerous smoke signals telling tales of olde Indian spirits forever immortalized in tin cans of screen popping western films / Meanwhile creating heroes out of bloated ten gallon hat wearing and rifle toting lawmen telling all the savages of the wilderness stories of god and Morales while stealing from the world the beauty of living off it instead of simply standing in it.

Author's Note

just trying to impress the goods

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I love my coffee. No coffee and no thinking. I like the places you took me with your thoughts. Coffee and some good music. Positive motivation for writing. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[stephen dillon]

again thanx coyote

[Gary H]

Really enjoyed the 'c' alliteration. Works very well. You know you can add spoken word on here somehow. It's either through soundcloud or something like that. Definately would be worth hearing.

[stephen dillon]

thanx i'll try it out