La Soir

It's not in french, nor does it have any french in it, but I thought 'the evening' was an appropriate title since I started typing it this evening...and yeah it's heavy and laden with deeeeeep emotion!

My Chest it’s...it’s caaaaving in,
It hurts too much too much too much, but I won’t give in,
Like shattered ribs,
Broken hearts,
Entwined limbs,
No.
I..I can’t breathe, I actually can’t breathe.
Everything is shaking,
My feet start aching,
Knees wobble,
Like the earth around me,
The quakes in my chest,
Some trembling fingers...
No.
I want to make things better,
But my pride gets in the way,
You’re killing me inside,
This black love won’t stay at bay,
Like ravenous vampires to pulsing bodies,
Vicious parasites to shimmering life,
Longing kisses between long lost lovers,
No!
I’m crying, I’m crying...I’m crying out to you,
But you lied, you lied, you’re friendship couldn’t stay true,
I’ll never stop writing poems about you,
Till the day I manage to break your heart in two,
As cruel as that sounds,
I want you to understand,
That my heart is battered, partly at your hand,
You didn’t mean to, I know that for sure,
But when he told you, our friendship couldn’t endure,
The pain I felt, there is barely a cure...
Maybe one day I’ll stand up and say,
I never wanted things to be this way,
So don’t leave my side forever more,
Please, I promise I’ll never be a bore,
Like a glittering jewel that caught your gaze,
A beautiful sun you squint at in a haze,
A quiet love so small and kind,
Something so minute, but yet so defined.
Yes.

 

Author's Note

I hope the curly font isn't an issue for readers, I just wanted it to have a handwritten look so it'd feel more personal. The colours, just a usual feature for my writing most days. I might have a picture for this but I'm not sure what yet, I'd have to like it a lot, as much as I like this heh.

Reviews

[Nathan Noble]

wonderful write, i really enjoyed reading this! the ending is great.

[Starting Over]

I lied it! Great job!!

[Everything Happens For ..]

i like the colours!! =] but yeah
it has a really nice flow/rhythm, i think youre getting back to your old writing style which is good tings !
good write babes xo

[Spilled Her Guts in Cur..]

so awesome