I'm not Insane.

I'm not Insane.

A Poem by Secondhand Tink
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Random words of spouted madness...

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I'm not !i"n£s$a%n^e&,

If I keep telling myself that I might eventually believe it,

 

It's very hard to keep the little sanity I have,

Maybe I should be like the man with the epeleptic son in the bible,

He said 'I have faith, help the little faith I have.'

I should ask someone to help the little sanity I have.

Aren't those people called shrinks?

 

Yeah, I guess that makes sense when I feel like I'm being,

(e)(n)(g)(u)(l)(f)(e)(d),

I.Can't.Breath.

[Crushing] feeling,

Mind is reeling,

Body is hurt, painful feelings,

Head wont function,

I find myself at a junction,

 

Which way do I >turn<?

Confrontation with loved ones isn't my thing,

I never know where quite to begin,

But if I don't this'll only bother me more,

Eating me up inside,

Making it harder and harder to hide,

Whom in can I confide?!?!

 

Somebody give me back my sanity.

I'm not !i"n£s$a%n^e&.

 

© 2008 Secondhand Tink


Author's Note

Secondhand Tink
It's not my usual thing...But I needed to have a release...

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amazing my dearest.

you're not insane. you're normal. ^_^


Posted 16 Years Ago


Thanks for the great reviews my lovelies



Posted 16 Years Ago


this is really powerful

dont worry honey, its gonna be okay. i know its not any consolation but it will be, just wait it out

and yooure definately insane XD in the sane sorta way XD

K


Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like it. It's really raw. Like it conveys what you're feeling without sounding like a typical 'poem' and you showed your feelings through cleverly used stuff like all the sesura in this line: 'I.Can't.Breath.'

Sometimes words sound their best when you let them spill.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Secondhand Tink
Secondhand Tink

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I'm Nai, I'm 17 and I live in London. I love music, especially Avenged Sevenfold and tonnes of others =] My tastes range pretty wide. Obviously I love to write, I'm a bit slow though...so please b.. more..

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