The Firey Madness in my Soul

A release for the terrible thoughts in my mind...

Why can't I bring myself to see this web I've made is wrong,

Why does my mind keep playing that song,

That song that makes me break to her over and over,

It does nothing to extinguish this fire, I can't even begin to loath her,

It doesn't help at all, and I'm not sure how much longer I can hide,

She's pulling me back, back deep inside,

Back into her web of lust,

Her web, where love isn't a must,

Her web, where I'm so tempted for a taste...The place where I always give into her chase,

I crave her touch,

I crave her too much,

I know deep down it's wrong,

But this lust...It's so so strong,

I've been held back by chains for what's felt like an eternity,

Without that drug,

Without the thing I yearn to see,

To unleash this fire, deep inside,

She's the one that breaks down these prison cells,

The one that drags me down...Into her deepest of hells,

Where lust is everwhere you turn,

This is the life, I know I shouldn't yearn,

But with her it looks so good,

Someone pull me back,

Lead me back to the light,

Let me win this dark, firey fight,

I know he'll hear me and keep me clean,

I know he'll hold me and make sure I wont give in,

His love will get me through,

My love for him will keep me true,

My love for him will save me from her firey grasp,

Even if with her lust, she often makes me gasp.

 

Reviews

[Floornine]

Wow, very powerful piece. This emotion can only come from within and you were able to tap it and show the reader. This is something most people can't do. It could be a little more refined especially the rhyme sceme, but otherwise, I commend you.

[Anonymous Shadow]

sweetie, the block button is there for a reason... sadly it takes willpower to use the real life one.
emotional piece though, takes the reader on a real rollercoaster.

[Wolfwind Words]

Such a struggle. Between the passions of the flesh and the knowledge of the mind and heart. One can only imagine how hard the war that wages in the soul at times like these.
You brought across your tale in fine words that carried me into your world, to see life as you must.
Wonderfull writing!
Sometimes the best peices of art, are results of the chaotic madness that lies benieth the surface of all of us!