Waiting

What if I told you I was waiting for you to speak 

day and night 

I long so much that I seek 

I try to reach but you're speechless

Are you that weak ?

Perhaps you want 

Perhaps you don't

you limit the way 

and told me to stay 

why are you changing ?

why are you cruel ?

what is it with you that makes you a fool ?

A fool to be away 

A fool to choose to lay 

your body with no motion

going inward with no emotion 

tracing life like it's yours 

earasing marks on the shores 

now you choose to go 

and I dare to say no more 

I respect thee

I respect me 

you no longer belong to me .

Reviews

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Accepting that this person needs space may be the best thing You can do and accept for now
Who knows one day that person may remember you gave them the much needed space you issued and return to you
To love someone truly is to let them go and seek what they need then return however hard it is
Ok I like your writing here well done

[Curtis.Lenker]

This is powerful piece of work. I love the picture this paints. Great job here.