love like that.

a love like that
it burrows down deep, deep, deep
underneath your skin, inside your bones
rends its way through tissue and muscle and blood
to rest inside your chest like another vital organ

a love like that
it burns fire-bright and warm as summer
radiating like sunlight through the pores of your skin
lighting up the darkest rooms
and setting whole cities on fire

a love like that
it sears itself onto everything you are
carves its name into flesh and bone and memory
seeping into every part of you
drowning you
burying you
saving you

Reviews

[Nicole]

i really like this piece. the last 3 lines are the best i think. a love like this will kill you make you suffer yet save you all in one. very good job! :)

[Dalia]

Wow, this was passionate and beautiful, it drew the most colorful image for love
well written

[Indiana Adame]

Thanks so much! :)

[Michael Kevin Spencer]

I loved this Indie!

It's such a feel-good organic write! hehe

[Indiana Adame]

Haha, I think I like that description. Thanks! :)

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy..]

beautiful and biological poem ;)

[Indiana Adame]

D'aww, thanks. :)

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

:)