fee ling blu

fee ling blu

A Poem by Amrit Evan Gupta
"

something

"

fee ling blu

 

blu like

canigiveyouahug

blu like i can

see your face in the mirror

  fee ling like we look funny together

fun ny together

(can laugh together -- that is not blu(e) but red

or yellow or the only time i enjoy the color

orange isrightnow)

hear t is away in space that blue

planet

fee ling far

a little too much spa ce and mssing jst on littl prt

it cant click into place just yet because

part is still adrift

see your face in the mirror

© 2016 Amrit Evan Gupta


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lua
i've fallen in love with your writing style, this is incredibly clever

Posted 8 Years Ago


Amrit Evan Gupta

8 Years Ago

thank you so much lua!!

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Added on November 14, 2016
Last Updated on November 14, 2016
Tags: blue, sad, disconnect, disconnected, adrift, love, happiness, loneliness, red, yellow, orange