The Most Unbeautiful

To you, this could be

Unintelligible,

Illegible,

Incredible.

Without understanding of my past

you could be quickly bashed, or you can just

leave.

I wont plead.

I've got years of hurt under my belt, this isn't my first

time.

It was you that left these welps, leaving me jailed inside my mind.

 

You flipped my world upside down and it still rains, just from the ground. You've got me bound.

Dig deep into my intentions and there you will find the last bit of hope left in my soul,

And it's mine.

Reviews

[She comes, when I call ..]

Love this. Great unique structure. Would definitely like to read more works like this.

[Reena]

Of course it is yours and nobody can dare to take it from you! Like the attitude in the poem and it speaks volumes to me .
"it still rains, just from the ground. You've got me bound."--wow! that's the line I liked most.

[Sujash I. Purna]

Unique structure...hardly seen that, yet the words speak for themselves very clearly. Keep it up!