Clarity

give me time

Sometimes

when I'm craving a man's touch

I get flashbacks of you,

so electric

I feel like our eyes have made love before.

How clear the quality

showing me that I yearn for,

what I haven't even tasted yet.

Reviews

[JR]

"I feel like our eyes have made love before." That is a very powerful line, the center of this piece... that really grabs your reader. There is a universal feeling to this, we can connect with the language. I think we are at our best when we're yearning for things we haven't tasted yet.