While they listen/ while you talk

While they listen/ while you talk

A Poem by Inda

The privileged few
listen to you;
"Never felt wanted,
I've been let down often."
Meanwhile 80% of the world
works to buy food.
You can bet they're scarred too,
nonetheless the privileged listen to you.
At center stage;
use the space.

© 2017 Inda


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amazing i love it
thank you for sharing

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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So true man, the people with the small struggles are the only ones who have time to complain.

The real unfortunate ones are busy getting through life.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

different people have different struggles, doesn't make their personal pain any less. privileged or not. gave me something to think about. thanks for sharing

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Inda

7 Years Ago

In this case I was pointing out that we are privileged in that we get to worry about our emotional .. read more
Jessica Lima

7 Years Ago

we sure are privileged, but I've been on both sides of the spectrum and sometimes having less is act.. read more
Inda

7 Years Ago

ditto, been there too.

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Inda
Inda

miami, FL



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