Tamed

Midnight greets me with a smile,
Silence kept for the sake of the child.
The sky is the same,
Easily tamed.

Reviews

[AprilRN1210]

can it really be tamed?.. you are from the south, come on.. it can be a b***h sometimes.. when the winds open up and we get those tornadoes, I realize how insignificant we really are in the grand scheme of things.. and gazing at the stars and realizing the vastness of the universe.. wheeew.. yea, tame isn't what comes to mind.. you have me scratching my head over here over this one my friend.. I dunno... pretty thought-provoking as always :)

[Inda]

Hey my midnight friend! Thanks for your fantastic review! In regard to the "tame" line, I mean that the sky is easy to describe in writing, has been done over and over, so in that sense it is easy to tame. ;)

[AprilRN1210]

ahhhh, ok... that makes a little more sense.. ha!.. hey back at ya!.. always a pleasure sir :)

[s y e]

Short but amazing and so precise!

[writing mojo]

i like the open flight style in your piece.. many meanings and ...you do well with the nocturnal surrealism of being free from the sun to do anything..excellent

[misha]

You are wonderful in your writing style. So simple yet so complex. Each line is so powerful! I loved this. Great job!

[Inda]

Thank you! Glad you liked it and reviewed. :)

[misha]

You are welcome :-)