She says I'm distant.

Won't you smile back?
Is that too much to ask?
Show that you care,
It's not enough to know you're there.
Touch me now and then,
Let me know you feel the same.
I cannot guess
Those thoughts inside your head,
speak to me,
don't just breathe.

Reviews

[Frontier]

It's kinda true though, some relationships are made of mostly breathing together.

[misha]

Great point made in this! Keep it up

[Baby Ricochet]

Yeah. I get that too. ....................

[AprilRN1210]

heck yea!! I can so relate to this.. (you trying to be a smarty pants with this?).... either way... ha! I see the truth in this.. we wanna know how you are FEELING, what you are THINKING... we can't read your mind, same way you can't read ours... but.... on the other hand... sometimes, words aren't needed.. it is enough to know you are there... just because you are sitting next to me doesn't mean that you have talk to me.. we can be in the same room without talking.. when I am mad, I probably don't want to talk about it, and I understand when you don't want to talk when pissed.. but... the key is OPEN communication.. JEEZ!!!
ha... anyways... yes, you KILL me with your ability to say so much with SO LITTLE... I am JEALOUS...
love this one...

[Inda]

You see right through me, ha! Trust me there's little to envy, your talent is great my friend and it is I who is envious of you and your mastery of the language, nonetheless i'm glad you like my prose and thanks for the fantastic review!

[AprilRN1210]

I do see through you (most of the time).. you are sneaky sometimes... but, I like it!! and you are too kind... but thank you, you have brought a smile to my face, my early morning, crazy hours friend... It is ALWAYS a pleasure...