Clouds of Indifference

Looked up at the clouds- indifferent to it all,

Wonder if they too will fall?

Slowly flying by,

No matter the bullets or children that die.

How dare they drift away

As if it's just another day?

Reviews

[Inda]

Thank you all, glad you enjoyed this piece!

[Baby Ricochet]

Natures indifference to man's stupidity. Good one

[Frontier]

Really good! Great way of capturing "Nature's indifference" :)

[AprilRN1210]

pretty powerful, insightful words my friend... can I add a few suggestions?

Looked up to the clouds, indifferent to it all,
wondering if they to will fall.
Slowly flying by
no matter the bullets or children that die.
How dare they drift away
as if it's just another day....

deep, moving, and in-your-face -makes you stop and think... well done... :)