Poet's lies

Calm waters,

orange sunsets

and purple skies,

young girls keep falling

for a poet's white lies.

Reviews

[AprilRN1210]

ain't that the truth my friend!!! AMEN.... we "touch" people with our words.. and some use this to their advantage wayyyyy to often... how easily it is to get lost in what we "see" in poetry... there are those manipulative, slick, sneaky ones that trap young, naive people, whether it girls or guys in their words.. well written and so true... love the honesty in your works.. as always, nice job, my friend...

[Inda]

Thank you my friend, i adore your reviews and i am always glad you stop by!

[AprilRN1210]

you're welcome and hey hey hey... I see your response down there!!! shame on YOU!! :P

[misha]

I loved this piece. Young girls can be so naive when it comes to such tricks and manipulations of words and lies. Great write!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

An interesting little ditty that tells a salutary tale. Personally to keep ther balance I would drop the word 'white'.

[Inda]

Thanks for the RnR! In this case the white stands for harmless. But the reason i put it there is because it is lie, it isn't harmless. I am the poet and i lie.

[Baby Ricochet]

God I hope so..............................

[Inda]

Right? Ha! Thanks for stopping by!