She's out there.

She's out there
Somewhere.
From here
It's hard to see where.
She's scared,
Heart's bare,
Got burned
Though forewarned.
When it's late
Worry adorns her face
She ponders upon her fate,
For whom does she wait?

Reviews

[AprilRN1210]

awwwwww. how sweet... I like seeing this side of you sir.. It is what I tell myself on a daily basis.. He is out there somewhere... as I am sure she is for you... this has the hopeless romantic that I keep bound, gagged, and chained in my head sighing with content.. shame on you for that!!... all kidding aside, this is a lovely romantic, heartfelt, simple, honest piece that is a joy to read.. well done!!

[Inda]

Thanks April, I'm glad you enjoyed it and took the time to review it, means a lot!! :)

[AprilRN1210]

you know I am a fan, don't be silly.. I look forward to reading your pieces!! it is my pleasure :)

[Baby Ricochet]

They're all out there, waiting, waiting to strike.

[misha]

This was a wonderful piece. It painted a picture of a girl who has had her share of hearetach but she still searches for the one. Such a great write!

[Inda]

Tahnks so much, glad you like my stuff, means a lot that you take the time.

[misha]

You are welcome :-)