Stuck on You

Stuck on You

A Poem by Inda

Gum stuck to the sole of my shoe,
Trying to completly get rid of it, unable to.
Enter a nostalgic thought; a moment spent with you.

© 2014 Inda


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Cute little diddy inda ..................

Posted 10 Years Ago


awwwww, this is adorable... ha... made me giggle, and then go awwww... lol...

I love it.... oh my goodness.... you like rubbing in the fact that you can be so powerful with few words by making it even smaller and more powerful....

isn't funny how some people just "stick" with you... they get in your head and just stay there.. creeping in when you least expect it.. lingering throughout the day... you see something that reminds you of them... or hear something, or read something.... this piece so cleverly and humorously expresses that... made me giggle and melt... one of my favorites of yours... I love every word... AWESOME!

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on August 15, 2014
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Inda
Inda

miami, FL



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