Still Waiting

Waiting for a moment,
bound to arrive.
Once I'm truly in it,
I'll feel so alive.
Any second now, it's all going to change,
Gone will be the sadness and the pain.
Minutes turn to hours, hours to days,
I keep waiting anyways.
It's right around the corner-happiness.
I'm plagued with doubts,
this I confess.
On the horizon, another boring sunset.

Reviews

[AprilRN1210]

awwww, why does the sunset have to be boring?... huh?... so much beauty there to behold.. just have to look... things seem to find you when you aren't looking for them... funny how life works sometimes..

what moment would you be waiting for?... that sunset should make you "feel alive"... time does "pass by" but we still look, and wait..

Don't let those doubts hold you back... they will try... they get in "cohoots" with fear and cause havoc on your heart... gotta watch em... sneaky little buggers...

nice write as usual.. this one speaks of wanting change, of looking for that happiness in your life and letting go of those doubts and pain... :)

[Inda]

Thank you! I just wanted to sort of s**t on sunsets. Ha! :)

[AprilRN1210]

well, you did.. meanie... what'd they ever do to you?? :P