Summer in Miami

Forecast calls for 90% humidity.
South Beach is occupied by sweaty
tourist
and obnoxious high schoolers.
There's salt in the air,
sand in my hair,
soccer moms in bikinis
downing virgin daiquiris,
young girls sun-bathing;
old men jogging,
alcohol spilled on the sidewalk
and everyone shouts when they talk.
Summer in Miami, it's quite a sight.
Still, to me it just feels right.

Reviews

[Inda]

How I would love it to walk there just for a minute... your words, just bring me there. We have the same weather here now, and for us Northern Europeans, it's hot lol... I loved all the details you came up with in this one, I only know this from series I watched, and movies of course... but I can imagine it vividly.

- Elisa :)

[Inda]

Yeah all that shines isn't gold, but it still has it's charms. Thanks for stopping by and reviewing my stuff Eli, means a lot. :)

Always my friend, he he... I believe you ;)

[s y e]

I felt like I was there.... but now I wanna stay! Haha, this was amazing, Inda. I loved this one. I have missed reading you my friend.

[Baby Ricochet]

I never liked Miami. Goddamn virgin daiquiris are why. You drink a virgin daiquiri the terrorists win.

[AprilRN1210]

Well, you certainly tease the senses with this imagery.. I feel like I have just left the mud of Mississippi and hit the beaches of Miami.. nice job...

[Inda]

Thanks for your kind words April, glad i could transport you even if for a brief moment, thanks again for your words!

[MagicAl]

Sometimes it's these little things that makes it 'home'! :)

[Inda]

Yep the smallest thing indeed. Thanks for the review