Her countenance was hard and bitter.
She spoke of the importance of structure;
something which one must always consider.
This was her upmost concern,
nevermind the metaphors, keep up the form!
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Poetry is so personal, I think. Everyone should just write from the heart, and structure is important, (for some)... but there are always natural gifted writers, like you, who dance with their words in mind, and there comes music to the page, once written... :) I personally prefer that more. ;)
- Elisa
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Totally agree with you Eli, while structure is important in other types of writing, poetry allows so.. read moreTotally agree with you Eli, while structure is important in other types of writing, poetry allows some wiggle room. Thanks for the kind words, means a lot! :)
10 Years Ago
Exactly Inda lol, I like that term... hah! English does have some funny words. Always my pleasure, I.. read moreExactly Inda lol, I like that term... hah! English does have some funny words. Always my pleasure, I will check more, I see you're on the roll ;)
Structure is important, but once in awhile, you gotta break it.
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Yep. I've never been a huge fan of structure, but I remember my old english teacher constantly speak.. read moreYep. I've never been a huge fan of structure, but I remember my old english teacher constantly speaking about it.
Poetry is so personal, I think. Everyone should just write from the heart, and structure is important, (for some)... but there are always natural gifted writers, like you, who dance with their words in mind, and there comes music to the page, once written... :) I personally prefer that more. ;)
- Elisa
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Totally agree with you Eli, while structure is important in other types of writing, poetry allows so.. read moreTotally agree with you Eli, while structure is important in other types of writing, poetry allows some wiggle room. Thanks for the kind words, means a lot! :)
10 Years Ago
Exactly Inda lol, I like that term... hah! English does have some funny words. Always my pleasure, I.. read moreExactly Inda lol, I like that term... hah! English does have some funny words. Always my pleasure, I will check more, I see you're on the roll ;)
I love fiction that's gritty and honest and so my stuff is often times like that. I don't have as much free time as I'd like, but i will get to the request in time and appreciate anyone who takes the .. more..