Word Spill

Sometimes I use words to fill
The page, posing as prose,
Yet lacking purpose,
Like an ink spill.
Sometimes I speak of nothing,
Still you question everything.

Reviews

[AprilRN1210]

sometimes people use "words" to cover up, they take them and spread them around like a "filler" trying to either fool others, or themselves.. It is the ones that see this that will question it.. they know you.. they know something is buried under there... they know that the words that you have "spilled" are just empty words... They want to see the "real you".. Those colorful, bright, lovely words that mean something... I like your ability to use such short simple, concise thoughts to make the reader ponder, and feel.. very nice skill indeed my friend.. good job... :)

You, my friend, even if you think you do, are never lacking purpose with your ink... this was on point, and very nice to read ^^ And yes, you have the gift to make people ponder, (a good thing) he he...
Enjoyed your Word Spill :)

- Elisa

[Inda]

Thank you all! Haven't had time to say thanks before. Means a lot!

[s y e]

This is fantastic, Inda! You blow me away eaach time, loved your thoughts.

[Stephanie M]

This is a nicely written poem. I'm putting pen to page, even though I'm not sure what I'm going to say.

[Baby Ricochet]

I really like this one. It's like "yes I write a lot of crap and you still find meaning that wasn't there."

[Mirra]

So true! I can relate to this. I like how you kept it simple ^_^ Well done!

[Purbleazaleya]

Really nice depiction of how we often use words to avoid awkwardness, and when we ramble we speak things that leave space for questioning. Short but sharp.