Ohh, I like the concept " half-thought," Inda. I just wish you could have elaborated this, you know, but I guess you really intended this to be brief. There's some depth in your brevity. Nice.
I love fiction that's gritty and honest and so my stuff is often times like that. I don't have as much free time as I'd like, but i will get to the request in time and appreciate anyone who takes the .. more..