She Wakes Up Alone.

She Wakes Up Alone.

A Poem by Inda
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A woman's prespective on a one night stand.

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Did you fear my bitter coffee
Or the bright morning sun?
I'd ask you to tell me,
But you're long gone.
Did I see something in your eyes?
What of the things you said?
Was all of it lies
To get me into bed?
-The empty apartment screams,
Yes!


© 2014 Inda


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Short and to the point, but from a woman's perspective I would think it would be a lot longer...:D
Nice work my friend!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Inda

10 Years Ago

Yeah, jt would be way longer lol, thanks for taking the time!
We'll say and do anything for it. It's the nature of the beast

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Inda
Inda

miami, FL



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