No Delay
A Poem by
Inda
I'm not lost or alone.
Nor a spirit,
Just skin and bones.
And thats ok, either way
Death will not delay.
© 2013 Inda
Reviews
And that's OK, either way
Death will not delay....(i can say that about myself)
i loved the poem ! thumbs up!
Posted 10 Years Ago
another short but powerful poem, bravo!
Posted 10 Years Ago
another short but powerful poem, bravo!
Nope. Death doesn't wait for anything. When your number's up it's up. Trust me on that.
Posted 10 Years Ago
Nope. Death doesn't wait for anything. When your number's up it's up. Trust me on that.
That's a wonderful poem, my friend ! You didn't simply caught a mood, you caught the human condition (if you're pessimist) or the men attitude towards it (if you're optimist). That's a masterpiece ! I believe your best poem so far
Posted 10 Years Ago
That's a wonderful poem, my friend ! You didn't simply caught a mood, you caught the human condition (if you're pessimist) or the men attitude towards it (if you're optimist). That's a masterpiece ! I believe your best poem so far
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Thanks so much! I like it a lot myself!
Loved the flow of this one and the rhyme was great! I loved it.
Posted 10 Years Ago
Loved the flow of this one and the rhyme was great! I loved it.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Thanks Noodle! Glad you liked it. :)
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Added on December 14, 2013
Last Updated on December 14, 2013
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Inda miami, FL
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I love fiction that's gritty and honest and so my stuff is often times like that. I don't have as much free time as I'd like, but i will get to the request in time and appreciate anyone who takes the ..
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