No Delay

No Delay

A Poem by Inda

I'm not lost or alone.

Nor a spirit,

Just skin and bones.

And thats ok, either way

Death will not delay.

© 2013 Inda


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And that's OK, either way
Death will not delay....(i can say that about myself)

i loved the poem ! thumbs up!

Posted 10 Years Ago


another short but powerful poem, bravo!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Nope. Death doesn't wait for anything. When your number's up it's up. Trust me on that.

Posted 10 Years Ago


That's a wonderful poem, my friend ! You didn't simply caught a mood, you caught the human condition (if you're pessimist) or the men attitude towards it (if you're optimist). That's a masterpiece ! I believe your best poem so far

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Inda

10 Years Ago

Thanks so much! I like it a lot myself!
Loved the flow of this one and the rhyme was great! I loved it.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Inda

10 Years Ago

Thanks Noodle! Glad you liked it. :)

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Inda
Inda

miami, FL



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