Open Window

Window's open,

Sunlight's coming in

Lighting up my room.

--you'll be leaving soon

Reviews

[Mehak Mushtaq]

Goodness, this is really very good.

[Inda]

Thank you!

[Nicole Williams]

Lol this just made me giggle,
Was just talking about the same thing.
Good write mate.

[Inda]

Glad i could spread some cheer!

[s y e]

Short but held a lot of meaning - I loved it Inda; it's great to read your work again, aha!

[Inda]

Thank you so much! :o

[Baby Ricochet]

Happy leaving or sad. It's the reader's guess. I'm going with happy

[Inda]

If happy is what you want, thats what it is!

[Bowers]

I loved this poem, though short it held enough emotion to make me feel sad... so great job!

[Inda]

Thank you, glad you liked it!

[Bowers]

your welcome! :D

[外人 (Gaiji..]

Every verse a vivd image, it's like you get a zoom in verse after verse, ending with a great final verse. Loved it :)

[Inda]

Thank you very much, means a lot coming from such a great poer like yourself!

[外人 (Gaijin)]

you're welcome ! "Great poet"? Thank you very much, always so kind :)