Sometimes

Sometimes there are no colors,

Enchanting auromas or foul odors.

Sometimes there is nothing to say

And no one needs you to stay.

Sometimes the night sky is opauqe,

Life is greedy and life is all you've got.

Reviews

[外人 (Gaiji..]

The synesthesia in the first two verses killed it, man !
What i love about your writings is that they show a modern and interesting version of the brevitas writing style. Your poetry is extremely visual, almost objective because by the use of the brevitas and ordinary language (excluding some words here and there) you give vivid images :) Loved it

[Inda]

Thanks again, glad you enjoyed it! :)

[Mehak Mushtaq]

Truth at its best. Very well written.

[s y e]

Perfection in your writes Inda - I love it!

[Baby Ricochet]

All that's true. Good one

[costa siwale]

Simply magnificent, great flow, thought triggering poem. Well done

[Bowers]

"Life is greedy and life is all you've got"

absolutely my favorite line in the piece...

quite thought provoking, and I love the imagery, nicely done

[Inda]

Thanks!! :)

[Christoph]

Agh, you got me, and I thoroughly enjoyed it.

[Inda]

Thanks, glad you liked it!