Blue & Fair

Blue & Fair

A Poem by Inda

Blue & Fair

 

Saw her sitting in the doctor’s chair,

biting her lips, playing with her hair;

I couldn’t help but stare.

-Not at her thighs,

but her eyes.

-blue and fair,

not a hint of despair,

but rather kindness.

Such innocence

I’ve never known.

Such beauty I’ll never own.

© 2013 Inda


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Sometimes we just catch up soulmates or lovers without even knowing, they could be~ and they are sitting just in front of us.... what a great piece of such a moment.... You never dissapoint me my friend, it's good to be back here.

- Elisa

Posted 11 Years Ago


Beauty is everywhere it's just a matter of opening one's eyes and beholding !

A sterling poem indeed !

Posted 11 Years Ago


this is a great piece. absolutely love the rhythm of it, it flows nicely. great job!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Lovely poem... nicely written Inda.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Very touching and true poem you bring us here, Inda. It's lovely in every way possible.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Inda

11 Years Ago

Thank you means a lot!
that's really beautiful inda.
thanks for sharing^^

Posted 11 Years Ago


Inda

11 Years Ago

Thank you for reviewing!
Laminators Dubai

11 Years Ago

thanks again for this fine reading^^
Truly admire this Inda, the image you create is incredibly tangible and the emotional affect pulls strings. Your writing is lovely.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Inda

11 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words! :)
This is actually quite beautiful Inda. Great Job

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Inda

11 Years Ago

Thank you!

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Inda

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