Let's Go Back

Let's Go Back

A Poem by Inda

Let’s Go Back

 

Let’s go back,

get in the Tardis- don’t touch that!

Let’s travel to the moment before

You slammed the door.

Back to the day we first met,

before it was all set

in stone.

Signed, agreed upon.

Let’s relive our first kiss

And how it felt to miss

each other after just one day.

Let’s go see how I went from being there to in your way.

 What we do

when we return is up to you.

 

 

© 2013 Inda


Author's Note

Inda
For those who don't know a Tardis is a time machine. For the Whovians who do know, enjoy!

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I reveled in every word. Gosh, how I wish to go back...

Thanks for penning :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


beautiful poem, I enjoyed reading it! (:

Posted 11 Years Ago


Oh I love the idea that you create here, to enter a time machine and to relive all those first moments, that actually are the most relived moments of all by us. I know that, every time I relive them, I get a fraction of those feelings, flowing in my blood. Even though it's just a fraction, they do the trick for that split second. I love this one Inda.

Posted 11 Years Ago


A who?

I love the tardis thing here and all was set in stone...
I loved the message that live every moment...then we don't need a time machine.

Thank you so much for sharing this timeframe.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Inda
Inda

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