Done?

Done?

A Poem by Inda

Done?

 

In different rooms-worlds apart,

No need to speak of love or broken hearts;

but how to mend this?

I don’t even know what caused this!

She does, she knows exactly what caused this distance.

But, I’ve run out of, “One more chance”.

I fear we’ll keep drifting on,

fear she’ll say we’re done.

© 2013 Inda


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another excellent read! thank you for sharing Inda!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Oh, that constant fear. I've had the chance, which I didn't take voluntarily, and had to endure the terrors of those feelings. It is ever so painful, but once you've survived the final ordeal, there'll only be one way to go.

Posted 11 Years Ago


That was a nightmare!

Nice job inda^^

Posted 11 Years Ago


Heartbreak sucks no doubt

Posted 11 Years Ago


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