Smile for Me

Smile for me,
let me see
happiness on your skin,
how the flesh bends
to create beauty.
-Truly
Speak no lies or half truths.
Remember the scar, but forget
the cut
forged by the blade.
-Some things are meant to fade
Like youth and tears,
life and fears.

Reviews

[Dreamer]

beautiful poem inda! it brought a smile to my face (:
very nice job!!!

keep smiling (:

[Quiet Child]

absolutely wonderful! i love it, great work (:

[I Am Svetlana]

I love how powerful this piece is and the overall meaning behind it. It's always delightful to see someone else smile, to see them be happy for some reason or another. I adore seeing other people smile and do what I can in order to make someone happy or smile, even just for a moment. Love this write, keep it up :)

[Inda]

Thanks for making me smile guys! ;)

[plainme]

I love the 5 first lines. 'How the flesh bends, to create beauty.' is a great phrase, it's mildly repugnant yet beautiful, because at the end it's all it is, a mere smile.
Lovely phrases in this one, very well crafted poem, Inda.

[Baby Ricochet]

That's for sure ............................

[Laminators Dubai]

im smiling....and...its a one sweet thoughtful write...keep writing.

[Pollai]

Really nice, enjoyed reading as always.

[s y e]

Inda, you know I am a huge fan of your works and this is no different. This is another excellent write. You'll have everyone smiling by the end of it, haah.